When I was at school, my teachers decided to make a trip to the swamps of a village. The idea of visiting this place didn’t spark much enthusiasm in me as I live near it, but I still went because my friends had insisted we go.The day arrived. The streets were cloudy and wet as it had rained the night before. When I get to school, I had the feeling that today was not going to be a good day but I shrugged the feeling off and continued being myself.
When we arrived, the guide told us that some places were restricted as it was very risky to be in those places. The tour began and was very boring. I began to play with my friends even though the ground was wet. After a while, my best friend and I slipped and fell. My clothes were dirty and my prediction was right, this was not a good trip at all.
Finally, the trip ended. I was very embarrassed throughout the ride back to school. Arriving at school, i called my mom to pick me up and my mother, upon seeing me, said to me, "you're the black sheep of the family and I was severely punished for my prank.
Luz Rojas Carrasco (Group 2)
Intermediate 07
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When I was at school, my teachers decided to make a trip to the swamps of a village. The idea of visiting this place didn’t spark much enthusiasm in me (maybe you could use "because" and not "as")I live near it, but I (in this case "still" is not necessary)went because my friends ("had" V.T.) insisted (ME TO)go.
The day arrived(? :S). The streets were cloudy and wet as it had rained the night before. When I(WENT TO)school, I (though) that today was not going to be a good day (P) but I shrugged the feeling off and continued being myself.
When we arrived, the guide told us that some places were restricted (BECAUSE) it was very risky to be in those places. The tour began and was very boring. I began to play with my friends even though the ground was wet. After a while, my best friend and I slipped and fell. My clothes were dirty and my prediction was right, this was not a good trip at all.
Finally, the trip ended. I was very embarrassed throughout the ride back to school. Arriving at school, (I) called my mom to pick me up and my mother upon seeing me, said(:)P "you're the black sheep of the family(")P and I was severely punished for my prank.
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